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I can't tell you how many times I felt that. I'm glad to see someone writing something to.....spice it up a bit.

Voices in my Head: Part seven (3) Sora waits to see if the Thin Man will speak again, but when he remains quiet, she steps away. She slowly walks towards the door, muttering to herself, trying to digest the alien's words. She is so distracted by her thoughts, she doesn't notice the door open...

Voices in my Head: Part Seven (2) As Sora walks towards the center of the room, wondering how she'll face the others, and how she'll get out of here without being seen, a voice behind her makes her jump. "Curious. I never thought I would see you again." Sora spins around to face the tall...

Voices in my Head: Part Seven (1) "What I don't understand is why we even need to go to school," Sora whines, walking into her room. The three girls thank the soldier that escorted them, and Rei shuts the door behind them. Turning to Sora, she responds, "Well, why wouldn't we? Think about it...

Oh, I didn't know you were taking a vacation in my version of Hell. Hope you didn't leave your sanity behind.

Voices in my Head: Part 6.5 The Commander releases Jake. The two take a seat, and the Commander asks, "So, did I succeed in proving my point?" Jake hesitantly nods, a sullen look on his face. The Commander sighs. "You know, I wasn't kidding about the "me being too lenient" thing. There are...

Voices in my Head: Part Six Commander Smith struggles to lift the huge stack of folders and papers without spilling them. He drops them into one of his desk's drawers in a desperate attempt to make his office look tidy before his video-meeting with the Counsel later in the day. The intercom on...

Voices in my Head: Part 5.5 "I hate having to get my hands dirty." Noah brushes his hand on his side and turns to the others. "We're done here. Dispose of this one, as well as all of them, except the gifted one and those two. We have other things..." The Berserker runs into the room, bellowing...

Voices in my Head: Part Five [Why would they lock it?] "Use some common sense, four." Noah rolls his eyes, an action he's grown to enjoy using, particularly with his more incompetent associates. "They didn't. It's the intruders." He types on the computer, and pulls up the holographic security...

Voices in my Head: Part 4.5 After a few minutes, the machine comes to life. A half dozen mechanical arms get to work, pushing Sora's bisected torso together. Glancing over Jake's shoulder, Alexandra says, "This is very impressive. For one so young, you are quite the skilled doctor." "Doctor...

Voices in my Head: Part Four The room lights up, and the group examines their surroundings. The color again fades from the faces of the two girls, and Jake stares, dumbfounded. "Dear.....God....." Alice mutters, and wraps her arms around her waist, suddenly feeling incredibly sick. Before them...

Voices in my Head: Part 3.5 After an hour and a half, they approach a large barrier made out of energy. Jake looks it over, thinking out loud, "Now what do you suppose this is?" Stepping to his side, Duncan says, "Maybe it's a door. Question is, can we open it, and can we do so slowly and...

Voices in my Head: Part Three "...then I suggest you keep your mouth shut from now on." Frank nods nervously, and Duncan drops him. Jake smiles, and opens his mouth to express his gratitude, when the door on one end of the room slowly opens. Duncan and Alexandra raise their weapons, and Jake...

Part three will have to come tomorrow. It takes me quite a bit longer to write these then even I usually realize. Still, gives me time to think of something good.

Voices in my Head: Part 2.5 "Why?" Frank steps forward. "Why should we leave? Why should we trust you?" Duncan rolls his eyes. "What are you talking about?" "What makes you think it's any safer out there?" "The base is under attack by someone." Jake rapidly types on the computer before him...

Voices in my Head: Part Two Jake glances behind him, his eye twitching in anger at the sight of the nearby body. Turning back, he says, "Sora, I'm so sorry, but we need to go." Suddenly, Sora looks behind Jake, a hopeful look on her face. "D...dad?" Jake glances back briefly. Dad? Then who...

Yeah, I find it's important to build up a character before throwing them into the fray. That is one of the worse mistakes I see in a lot of movies made nowadays. They introduce a character and have something happen to them or kill them off immediately, and they expect us to care when we don't...

As long as can entertain at least one person, I'm satisfied. As for part two, probably be up after I get off work, with part three (if I need a part three) up later tonight.

Inspired by MarineAvenger, I've decided to try my hands at a little story telling. You'll have to forgive me if it's a bit wordy. As I'm sure anyone who's had dealings with me would know, I can be a bit long winded, but as usual, I've done what I can to write it in a manner that makes it easier...

Feel free to keep writing them. We're not using this think tank for anything else write now, and it was entertaining. Heck, I have a few of my own I might want to share, but continue with yours for now. I'd personally love to hear more.