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I suppose. I guess I just expected more passion if he is against it from past experience. He seemed to threaten declaring a personal war against the protectorate if they harmed his daughter. And they just harmed her in the most personal, deep seeded, invasive way possible. I would call what was...

I don't see anything wrong with how he reacted. I mean... the destroying stuff was wrong, and I'm sure Atka (and possibly Gem) will be pissed about it. But I understood why he did it. He snapped. He lost it. He was pushed beyond his limit and acted accordingly. I just hope he can be brought back...

I enjoyed it. The banter was fun, the tendency for becoming evil to switch or open up your sexual preference is weird but amusing. And I really appreciated the quick but evident reference to Daniel Hunnigan. It didn't slip my notice. But... I couldn't help but feel... uneasy for the first part...

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Got one in myself. I hope you all enjoy. My characters' takes on current events. I have another solo planned. I might get to it today, but if I don't, I promise you'll see it tomorrow.

To Save, To Stop, We Stand United Onboard the Avenger Holo-Training Room Alexis huffed and heaved, desperately trying to catch her breath as she tried, just as desperately, to withstand the blows against her shield. It wasn't a holographic foe she was fighting today but rather Ayame, and an...

A rare treat!:D

That makes her Even more dangerous. Being motivated by bloodlust to boot makes her a scary opponent indeed.

Quite the interesting read. Seeing Azazel plays devil's advocate on the other side is quite interesting and inspiring in fact. It would motivate me to write something more with my Elder... if I wasn't already planning it to begin with.

I'm sorry. I wasn't trying to imply I thought you did something wrong. As I said, I was more disappointed in myself, not you. I did have a... small question. Was Vekinte's talk with Desmond implied to have happened off screen? Or did Patrem create Ember before his father had his convincing...

I thought the ones for mine were all well done. I wish Ayame has been mentioned too, but you technically mentioned most of my other characters, and I wouldn't want to be greedy.

Atka's sadness fills me with more sadness. Though... I... the final post was really good. Don't think otherwise. I just... wish I had been a part of it. You might recall that I, an in universe, Joe, called what was going to happen, and I feel he should have been a part of that, no matter how...

Pernicious Provocation This one is just scary. Thinking of the damage she could do, especially since so many of XCOM's people can't... or won't... give her their all... people will die...

Crimson Sunset Chilling. Absolutely chilling. And the figurative destruction of who Yakone is was beautifully written and glorious in a heart wrenching way.

Protégé Very unnerving to hear such talk and see such power in one that is esentially still a child. Liked the mention of a familiar Ethereal name. And the solar system thing was really cool.

“Resolve”(Part 3) An incredible conclusion to the fight, and a clever twist. Though it leaves me wondering if that poor man left with a concussion was in on the whole thing. Of not, I would be piiiiissed in his possition.

“Resolve”(Part 2) When I first read this part, I was thinking things were going too well, which was a sign that it was going to fail. Then the witch showed up and I knew the easy part was over.

“Resolve”(Part 1) Yakone did an excellent job arguing XCOM's side considering her position and the defenses given by her opponent. At the risk of opening up an ethical debate, I would have made three more points had I been in Yakone's shoes; 1) It is argued that a false electoral system is as...

As I said before, I'm rereading several posts, and giving them the attention my sulleness couldn't provide before, and maybe give some commentary they deserve. First up is Testing the Waters. All I can really say is it was pleasant. An enjoyable read that makes two people who just met seem like...

I want to mention the last several posts have been amazing, and I have loved each of them very much. I am glad to see Gem's strive to expand the story through his solos is strong even as he balances collabs, missions, and is school/social life. He has surpassed me by quite a bit compared to the...