XCOM ENGINEERING//RECRUITMENT PERSONNEL FILES
First Name: Taliken
Last Name: Flatliner
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Biographical Synopsis: When XCOM ASIA took a look into his government files, they found the biography of a fairly dedicated engineer working for the ZVEZDA-HOSHI Space Program between...
I believe that your character's application is well written. It is informative, personal, and gives us an idea of his personality. However, I believe you could have added onto the personal touch of your application by including more distinctive data on him, like a special date(quoting the...
First, thanks for reviewing my character application, I appreciate it.
Second, my reasoning behind putting her application in a 3rd person perspective of itself and not going into details from HER perspective is because of the way I see how XCOM recruits their operatives. I don't think they have...
I know everyone's busy, but could someone spare some time to make a critique of my character? On page 7.
I really think I could have improved it somehow, but I feel like I'm missing some key understandings in order to realize it.