Hello everybody, I'm making this post to ask for your help. Everybody is welcome to leave as much feedback and be as harsh as possible, it's the reason why I made this. What exactly am I doing here you might ask. Well many of you might know the character Avanix I created in the XCOM RP as an AI. The name I took from a character I created roughly about two years ago. I grew really attached to Avanix and we went through a lot of artwork together and still are as a matter affact to show what she looks like. Fact is that because of this attachment to Avanix I wanted to give her more life, more purpose, give her a story. Since I was in school during that time I also did not have much time to think about it all to much, but the idea was there. Now that I'm working I still have little to no time after work, but during work I have more time to think about the story I wanted to create two years ago. Recently I really got into it and created a ton of notes. Which brings me to you guys. Many of you here a great writters. So I'm asking for your help to judge, help, critisize, and so on, as you can. Every single comment will help me to improve building this story, this world based around Avanix. My idea was that I would post notes that I have made, and talk with it to anyone who is interessted in it. I also want to say that yes I'm very open to new ideas, but I hope that none of you will be all to sad or mad if I do decline an idea you might have thought would be really great. I want to mention that this story I'm creating will be very serious, people will die, things will be described in much detail, and everything should make sence or have a believable reason behind it. To that I also want to say that I will be jumping a lot around in this story. The story follows avanix from young to adult and maybe even further, and I plan to make it a long journey so every character can become alive. So say if a companion would die, it should be sad for both the characters and the readers. Nothing where someone dies and it feels like they were unimportant anyway. That is all I have to say for now, any further information that I forgot will be posted here. To start I will post the characters I have created starting with Avanix ofcourse. There will be many empty spaces that I hope to fill with your guy's help. One last thing to note that this is the original Avanix, she has nothing to do with the Avanix I created during the XCOM RP and was passed on to a fellow RP who continued her story. In no way do these two characters have anything to do with each other or are even related. I simply picked the name Avanix for the AI to fill in a name. Also Avanix was just a really great name to add a really long side meaning for an AI. A.V.A.N.I.X.: Advanced Virtual and Artificial Nano Intellectual Xeno-Unit.